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Dylan’s Story




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  1.    Lisa P. says:

    Dylan,
    I loved your story and I loved hearing you read it. You must love animals! I hope you had as much fun writing this story as it was fun to hear.
    Thanks for asking me to read it. I would love to read any other stories you write.
    Lisa

    Posted May 11, 2006, 5:08 pm #      
  2.    tessa says:

    Dylan
    I love reading about friends! It was great that they talked out their problem. And ice cream makes everything better doesn’t it?
    Tessa

    Posted May 16, 2006, 1:05 pm #      
  3.    Nick says:

    Sweet music and I liked the snake too!

    Posted May 17, 2006, 12:44 pm #      
  4.    Jenelle says:

    Hi Dylan,

    Remember me?

    I loved your story and hearing you read it.

    I miss you.

    Tell your mom I say hi!

    Peace and Love,
    Jenelle

    Posted May 17, 2006, 1:31 pm #      
  5.    Grandma Elaine says:

    Dylan,

    Wow! What an exciting story! You wrote about the part where the animals wrestled so well that I could just picture it in my mind. I liked the way you showed the hamster was a really good friend. It was a good ending for you had the animals cooperating and working out their problem.

    Did the hamster and skunk get their ice cream at TCBY?

    Grandma Elaine

    Posted May 18, 2006, 10:05 am #      
  6.    Jeremy and Aunt Jill says:

    Dear Dylan.
    Wow, what a great story. Jeremy says “You used your words really well and had friendship and kindness in your story”. Hope we can see you soon. Are you ready for another fun ski trip?
    Lots of love,
    Jeremy and Aunt Jill

    Posted May 18, 2006, 3:43 pm #      
  7.    Karen says:

    Hey Dylan,

    Very cool story…do you think the skunk, snake and hampster would come by my house and take me out for some ice cream? I like vanilla heath crunch. Yummy!

    Karen

    Posted May 22, 2006, 1:01 pm #