Your story was great jillian!!!! I loved it. It haad so much detail and I like how you did not say how the car got fixed.
~your new buddy Lila~
I’m glad that Heather wasn’t in her car so that she didn’t hurt her head! I especially like your image of a cloud shattered in a million pieces; that sounds like it would be beautiful. Your story gave me a really clear picture of how upset Heather was to have those big dents in her car!
"Jillian’s Story" was written May 4, 2006 by banyan, and is filed under Uncategorized
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