1st Grade – Banyan


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Jillian’s Story




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  1.    Lila says:

    Your story was great jillian!!!! I loved it. It haad so much detail and I like how you did not say how the car got fixed.
    ~your new buddy Lila~

    Posted May 17, 2006, 2:46 pm #      
  2.    Ann says:

    I’m glad that Heather wasn’t in her car so that she didn’t hurt her head! I especially like your image of a cloud shattered in a million pieces; that sounds like it would be beautiful. Your story gave me a really clear picture of how upset Heather was to have those big dents in her car!

    Posted May 17, 2006, 5:40 pm #