I’m glad that Heather wasn’t in her car so that she didn’t hurt her head! I especially like your image of a cloud shattered in a million pieces; that sounds like it would be beautiful. Your story gave me a really clear picture of how upset Heather was to have those big dents in her car!
Your story was great jillian!!!! I loved it. It haad so much detail and I like how you did not say how the car got fixed.
Posted May 17, 2006, 2:46 pm~your new buddy Lila~
I’m glad that Heather wasn’t in her car so that she didn’t hurt her head! I especially like your image of a cloud shattered in a million pieces; that sounds like it would be beautiful. Your story gave me a really clear picture of how upset Heather was to have those big dents in her car!
Posted May 17, 2006, 5:40 pm