1st Grade – Banyan


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Nina’s Story




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  1.    Doug Zesiger says:

    Dear Nina,
    I loved your story. I loved how your girl and your lizard got mad at each other and how they had a dream in common. I thought the dream idea was especially nice. I also liked that you were willing to let your girl step on the lizard. It made her seem real and the lizard’s reaction felt real too. Great story and great ending. Keep up the good work my dear.
    Doug

    Posted May 16, 2006, 10:35 am #      
  2.    natalie says:

    I liked your story because of the ending. You know the part were the girl and the
    snake were friends.

    Posted May 17, 2006, 1:01 pm #      
  3.    Jenelle says:

    Hi Nina,

    Remember me?

    I loved hearing you read your story! I miss you.

    Peace and Love,
    Jenelle

    Posted May 17, 2006, 1:42 pm #      
  4.    Sofie says:

    Hey Nina!

    I loved your story! It was wonderful! I really liked that the lizard and the girl became friends. Its so cool you get your own voice to tell the story! I can’t wait to see you next buddy class!

    Hugs and Happieness,

    Sofie

    xoxo

    Posted May 17, 2006, 2:53 pm #